I wish I were good at creating haikus. This was one is very introspective. If a pen traces words, and writing liberates a trace,then would “traces” be our dreams? perhaps Im thinking too deeply.
Thank you Vinny for your kind words! I am happy that you like this Haiku and that you are sharing what make you feel and think and is not too deeply! Also yes for our dreams!
Carolina Russo |Sa'Reyah 
Very true…. Happy Labor Day, Carolina!
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Thank you Erika! And you have a great day! Hugs! <3
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Thank you, dear 💖
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I do love haiku… this is lovely!!! :)
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Thank you so much Debi I am so happy that u like it! :-)
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Well written Carolina.
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Thank you Miriam I am happy to see you here! How are you doing? <3 :-)
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Life’s been a bit hard but I’m doing okay, thanks Carolina. xo Hope you are as well. Love and hugs to you. :)
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Love and hugs to you! :-) <3
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Beautiful! Thank you for sharing this.
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Thank you Jean for your kind comment! I am really happy to know that you like it!
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Lovely words, Carolina 💖
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Thank you Carol! Have a happy Labor Day! ;-)
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I wish I were good at creating haikus. This was one is very introspective. If a pen traces words, and writing liberates a trace,then would “traces” be our dreams? perhaps Im thinking too deeply.
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Thank you Vinny for your kind words! I am happy that you like this Haiku and that you are sharing what make you feel and think and is not too deeply! Also yes for our dreams!
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Thanks for responding and the thought- provoking haiku. I was going to say thoughts, instead of dreams.
But dreams made more sense to me.
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You’re welcome and your comment is very much appreciated! :-)
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What a beautiful Haiku. Happy Labor Day!
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Thank you Maria and I hope you had a great Labor Day!
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Very wonderful, Carolina! 😊
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Thank you Syl I hope you are doing well!
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Good ‘ku. “Liberating a trace”…love that line and I’m a big fan of haiku. 😊 Have a wonderful day.
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Thank you I am very happy that you like it! Wish you a great day! ;-)
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